Vanessa and Her Sister

Priya Parmar published Vanessa and her Sister in 2014. I found it used at the Four-Eyed Frog in Gualala. This book was just engaging enough for a leisurely weekend away. Parmar’s graceful prose made it an easy book to slip into, and I liked many things about it. It did not satisfy me completely, but I’m comfortable recommending it, especially for people who don’t know much about Virginia Woolf.

Woolf has been thoroughly studied and biographied; her intellectual, literary family the Stephens have also been thoroughly written about, and the group of writers, thinkers and artists Vanessa Stephen (Virginia’s older sister) and Viginia gathered around themselves after the deaths of their parents are well documented too. Almost everyone has at least heard of the Bloomsbury Group. Parmar plainly believed that Vanessa Stephen deserved some attention. (She’s been well-biographied too, but this is a novel.) Thus, Vanessa and Her Sister, written–at least at first–in the form of a secret journal, supplemented by letters, postcards and ephemera from the Bloomsbury Group itself.

No journals of the real-life Vanessa have been uncovered, although much of her correspondence with her sister has been preserved and published. In this book, we start reading the journal from the first Thursday night “salon” at the Stephen children’s new house in the Bloomsbury neighborhood. Vanessa lives with her brothers, Thoby and Adrian, and her sister Virginia. In the early pages of the book, Virginia is infantilized, first throwing a screaming tantrum because she doesn’t want to eat breakfast, then crashing into Vanessa’s room without warning. It’s only after Vanessa calls her a “little beast” and talks to her the way one talks to a child is it revealed Virginia is at least 20. She has already had one episode that required hospitalization, but Vanessa seems to treat Virginia’s mental illness as an inconvenience for her. Later on in the book, she refers to Virginia’s “mad scenes,” as if they are, in fact, scenes, not truly terrifying episodes where reality melts away for the person experiencing them.

However, once the members of the Bloomsbury Group start showing up the book gets rolling. Parmar gets straight As from me simply for keeping the large unruly group of (historical) characters straight throughout the book… and their multiple affairs. The men of the group (Vanessa and Virginia are the only women members) change sexual partners like partners in a country dance, only on high-speed. Parmar also gets credit for centering Vanessa’s painting in her life. Real-life Vanessa Bell’s work influenced post-modernism, and her paintings are justly famous.

Parmar also does a good job of showing why Vanessa might have finally agreed to marry Clive Bell, a Bloomsbury Group member who was probably the weakest link intellectually, and the least liked. Bell, who was a self-indulgent hypocrite, paid real attention to Vanessa’s painting as art. Vanessa’s journey from friendship, through courtship and through the various stages of her marriage is well navigated here.

It’s well-documented that, once Vanessa married Bell, Virginia behaved badly–emotionally seducing her brother-in-law even if they never had a physical relationship. Uncovered from Vanessa’s point of view here, this betrayal is hollowing, shocking. The fact that Virginia does it only to drive a wedge between Bell and her sister, so that she remains central to Vanessa’s life, only makes it sadder and more desperate.

As a novelist, Parmar chose to leave out some historical facts to make her story tidier. This is always a choice with an historical novel. In the case of Virginia’s and Vanessa’s half-sister Laura Makepeace Stephen, however, leaving her out seemed like a glaring choice, if not an actual oversight. In order to portray Vanessa’s sense of her sister as a conniving, destructive force who (perhaps?) even fakes “mad scenes” to get her way, Parmar ignores the sister who was institutionalized from childhood in their family. In two places in Vanessa and her Sister, the issue of institutionalization is raised; once for Virginia and once when Vanessa’s lover Roger Fry institutionalizes his wife Helen. In neither case is Laura even mentioned. Laura is, in fact, unlike another half-sister who died and is mourned by the family, never mentioned. It’s possible that Vanessa would not write about the forbidden sister in her journal, but I don’t believe that her existence didn’t echo in that house as they all faced the struggle of Virginia’s mental illness.

Two-thirds of the way through the book, suddenly, Vanessa starts opening her journal entries with dialogue. I have no trouble with a character writing dialogue in a journal. I do have a problem when it starts on a narrative high point (like the beginning of a chapter), as in, ” ‘They’re going to do what?’ I said to Clive, my voice rising with incredulity.” If this is the way you want to tell the story, then just tell it in first-person, and dump the journal structure. This shift made the soap-opera aspects of this family and group (and believe me, real life was plenty of soap-opera with these folks) even more operatic, and less convincing.

The book races through the last several pages to deliver us a happy moment for Vanessa, when one of her paintings is shown at Fry’s second post-modernist exhibit. It is a happy ending for the protagonist, but I felt like the rushing showed.

In spite of those things, this book made me curious to seek out nonfiction about the Bloomsbury Group, and reminded me that there is some Virginia Woolf I want to read. Parmar’s portrayal of a woman artist who is also trying to be a mother and a wife is well done.









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Comeuppance in a Tik-Tok

Comeuppance Served Cold got a cameo in this fun Tik Tok video from Gibson Bookstore in New Hampshire.

(I’d embed it, but WordPress won’t let me.)

It’s a fun video that will bring joy to introverts everywhere and I’m proud to see my ARC included. This video made be curious about the store and I went and looked.

They’re a general interest bookstore with what looks like a great fiction selection, you can order online from them, and I love their Student Reviewers program!

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Booklist Gives Comeuppance A Starred Review!


This new novella by Deeds is a fun, fast-moving heist story that will immediately hook readers who love 1920s-era worlds and soft-fantasy world building. The subplots and side characters make up the emotional core of this novel, with Dolly’s whip-smart plotting, self-preservation instincts, and persuasive abilities pulling many of the strings. Using nonlinear storytelling and unfurling slow reveals, Deeds crafts an entertaining tale that spirals towards a tense, effective climax.

Booklist Online

Like Publishers Weekly, Booklist gave Comeuppance Served Cold a starred review! Happy dance!

Cover of Comeuppance Served Cold. Caption, HURRAY!
HURRAY!
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Nice Review from Grimdark Magazine

Comeuppance Served Cold got a nice review here, courtesy of Grimdark Magazine.

A couple of things stood out to me. The first was what a close and generous reading reviewer Angela Gaultieri gave the book. This is the kind of read every writer hopes for. Gaultieri understood what I was trying to do, and thinks I accomplished it. That’s enough to keep me going for a while!

The second thing, sort of an obvious one, is that while Comeuppance deals with death, violence and exploitation, most of it happens off the page, or is veiled in silk gloves. In other words, it’s not a grimdark book.

“Grimdark,” by the way, is one of those sub-genres perfectly defined in its name. Its focus is on gritty, bleak, gory, dirty, messy violence; betrayals, plagues, dystopian societies and so on. Clearly, Grimdark Magazine doesn’t limit itself to reviews of that sub-genre.

I did chuckle when I read a later paragraph in the review, where the reviewer assures readers that even though Comeuppance isn’t grimdark, it’s grim and dark enough for them to enjoy it!

I agree! C’mon, grimdark folks, it’s still the Great Depression in this book! Plenty of grim to go around!

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It’s Nearly Out in The World!

Comeuppance Served Cold will be out in just about two months! Word is trickling out. It’s gotten some nice reviews on Goodreads, (readers who got ARCS). It’s starting to show up other places as well.

Publishers Weekly included it on a list of fiction empowering women and girls.

FanFiAddict put in on their “Anticipated Titles” list.

Autostraddle, a site dedicated to uplifting feminist and LGTBQ literature, called it out too!


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An Old Man’s Game

Andy Weinberger opened Sonoma’s beautiful bookshop, Readers’ Books, in 1991, along with his wife Lilla. I’m always pleased to discover a book by someone I know in a different mode. When I visited Sonoma a couple of weeks ago, I picked up Weinberger’s debut mystery, An Old Man’s Game at his store.

Detecting isn’t an Old Man’s Game unless that old man is Amos.

An Old Man’s Game was published by Prospect Park Books. In February, 2021, the publisher was acquired by Turner Books, so I don’t know what that means for the publishing house.

An Old Man’s Game is a detective novel featuring Amos Parisman, the “old man” of the title. Amos is a retired private detective in Los Angeles, called out of retirement by the board of a local synagogue to investigate the abrupt death of their charismatic and controversial rabbi. With his Latino helper Omar and an older, jaded police detective, Amos tries to investigate, but answers are thin on the ground, and the body count soon mounts. At home, Amos tries to adjust his life to the needs of wife Loretta, who seems to have a form of cognitive decline.

This wasn’t really my kind of mystery, so I found that aspect disappointing. I enjoyed Amos’s descriptions of various Los Angeles neighborhood’s, and his acerbic take on organized religion, even the one he was raised in. The bits of Jewish culture, particularly around food, were great.

While I liked much of Amos’s snarky first-person narration, I found a lot of the book to be uncomfortably dated. He comments that two junior cops learned everything they know from watching Dragnet. The second iteration of Dragnet went off the air in 1970. If the story is set in the 20-teens, as if seems to be, none of them would be old enough to remember it. Amos’s solution is talky and stagy, which is in keeping with the Chandleresque style he is emulating, but it didn’t engage me.

The subplot of the book involving the enigmatic rabbi’s controversial theory about Judaism was amazing though, resonating with Michael Chabon’s The Yiddish Policeman’s Union. I loved following Amos through the thicket of the rabbi’s mind as he reads the deceased’s sermons.

Enjoy this book for the travelogue of Los Angeles through nostalgic eyes, bits of snarky banter and the good use of L.A. landmarks and meeting places. And kudos to Andy for realizing not one dream but two–owning a bookstore, and publishing a novel!













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The Siberian Dilemma is a Dilemma

The Siberian Dilemma is the ninth Arkday Renko thriller by Martin Cruz Smith. I realized I’ve only read two: Gorky Park, something of a classic, and Havana Bay. I suspect this book would have more resonance if I’d read others, particularly its immediate predecessor, Tatiana, since Tatiana plays a major role in this one.

I was thrilled by this thriller in spots, but I wasn’t convinced. Arkady’s trek into Siberia seemed riddled with coincidences, and the final twist at the end felt random. On the other hand, the prose was lovely and Smith’s descriptions of a landscape I’ve only seen in movies was vivid and chilling.

On the other other hand, there was the character of Bolot, which makes me ready to forgive nearly everything that dissatisfied me. Bolot introduces himself to Arkady on the flight to Irkutsk. He offers his services as a factotum. And what a factotum he is! He develops (or is revealed) from a glad-handing fast talker to a hunter and woodsman, loyal, inventive, resourceful… and a shaman.

The titular “Siberian Dilemma” is explained to us in the last third of the book, and demonstrated in its last few pages–an ending that seemed a bit too coincidental.

People who have read the others will like this more than I did, because Arkady is still the rebel, the thorn in the sides of the establishment. I’m glad I read it, mostly for Bolot. It reminds me what good stylist Smith is.

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Year In Review

We’re firmly into 2022 now, a good time to take a look back at 2021.

Do I expect 2022 to be better? In one sense, yes. I have two books coming out in the first half of this year! Other than that, I expect different. Only different.

But, 2021. Let’s hit the personal highlights for me:

Politics:
One single fact made me breathe a sigh of relief through all of 2021; we had a president who was an adult in the White House. That made a substantial difference. I look at where we are now–even now–with the Omicron variant and I get a chill thinking about how much worse it could be.

Downside, of course–the megalomaniac loser who had been in the White House before, the one who demonstrated that he had no regard for the United States of America, who would trample our security and destroy our republic if it put a dollar in his bank account or gave him a happy for two seconds, did spur his minions to engage in an act of treasonous insurrections that cost lives. He’s still out there, and one entire party has sold its soul to him. That wasn’t great during 2021. But still.

In 2021, the sold-our-soul party mounted an expensive and annoying recall effort in California, wasting millions of dollars and thousands of hours. Fortunately, they were soundly rebuffed.

In 2021, two jury verdicts gave me hope. No, I’m not seeing a pattern. I’m not holding my breath. But I do note it for the record.

Health:
Nationally, we were still in the grip of the Covid viruses in 2021. A large factor in that was a sizeable group of people who could be vaccinated and refused to be, giving the virus safe harbors and collaborating with the evolution of variants. These same people (obviously, please note that I am not talking about people who cannot be vaccinated for health reasons) also ranted and threw tantrums about wearing a mask. If you’re wondering why we’re where we are in 2022, look at those people first. From a distance. Wearing your mask.

Personally, the list of health-maintenance chores for myself gets a little longer every year, and 2021 was no exception. Overall, though, my health is good and I’m grateful.

Travel:
I’d laugh, but you know what? I did take a trip in 2021! It was a road trip with my dear friend Linda. And it was great.

I went to Mendocino a couple of times– and it was beautiful and inspiring, just as I always hope it will be.

Spouse:
Spouse is doing well, still managing to volunteer at the Wente Scout Camp pretty much monthly. A couple of times in 2021, the camp was on lockdown. (Spouse would have actually preferred to work during those times, because here would be no one around to slow him down.)

Speaking indirectly of Scouts–our friend Matt Fleming was awarded the Silver Beaver Award by his council. Much deserved!

I would point out that nationally, Scouting did not have a good year in 2021. Basically, the same avoidance practices the Catholic Church used with child molesters caught up with Scouting, too, resulting in a huge financial hit. Will the program take lessons learned to heart? I fear not, but I hope yes.

Friends and Community:

Friends and community kept me going during 2021–writing friends, long-time treasures like Linda and Sharon, new friends from workshops or Zoom classes.

Creativity:
Final edits on Comeuppance completed.
Developmental edits on Golden Rifts (Book Three of Copper Road) completed.
Practically polished draft of Chalice completed.
And this weird new thing started–a kinda magical spy thriller with sapient fungus.
A starred review from Publishers Weekly!
I figured out how to work with Goodreads! Kind of!
Reviews for Fantasy Literature as well as a weekly column.

I read so many great books in 2021. I… seriously. 2020 was a great year for speculative fiction books. 2021 continued the trend. I dare to hope that 2022 will build on those years, and be even better. Keep them coming, all you brilliant authors!

That’s it. I’ve looked back. (There are a thousand things I will remember as soon as I post this.) Now I look forward. Until I look back again. And check the side-views.










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Ink and Paper Blog Posted This!

Russell, a book blogger on YouTube, posted this awesome photo!

Check out Ink and Paper here!

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The Hugos: Three Big Wins for Tor.com

My new publisher’s works took the Hugo for Best Novel, Best Novella and Best Novelette.

To be fair, they kind of had to win Best Novella since every single nominated work was one of theirs.

The winners for the categories are:

Best Novel: Network Effect by Martha Wells.

Best Novella: The Empress of Salt and Fortune by Nghi Vo.

Best Novelette: Two Truths and a Lie by Sarah Pinsker.

I have read one of those three: Network Effect, and thoroughly enjoyed it. In fact, I think its win shows that 2021 was a year when people voted from enjoyment (dare I say escapism?).

Having read The Chosen and the Beautiful, I celebrate Nghi Vo’s win with her debut novella. She’s a writer to watch. And Pinsker’s work is always thoughtful, funny, compassionate and human.

Check out all the awards. They’re always interesting.

Of course I think Tor.com is the best place for novellas, because they’re publishing mine, but there are small publishers out there doing interesting things with the form. Neon Hemlock is doing some beautiful stuff right now, for instance. Check them out.




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